Can someone check my writing in my first paragraph for my memior and see if i did an error for grammar and puncuation i feel like i need to add more.. press the photo oktbh i don't think i'm doing this it's sounds like a 3rd grader wrote this : ( oh an btw i'm gonna indent and fix the spelling later i'm typing this on my phone so it's difficult u and press the photo so u can see the writing if u can't see it i just need to u to check the beginning